Wednesday, June 07, 2006

Entry: Random act of literacy

Ok...it's one of those random freak times of the year and I'm feeling literary. So, sit back, STHU, and enjoy my petty attempt to make sense. :)





The Disconnect
By: Me

We meet
She smiles
I look away

We walk
We talk
We touch
I look away

She talks to me
She laughs with me
She jokes with me
I look away

She comforts me
She holds my hand
She listens to me
I look away

She holds me
She flirts with me
She brightens my day
I look away

I wake up
I look to her
I finally smile
but she is gone

!!!

I frown
I shrug
I ponder
I learn

Sonofa....
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous10:37 AM

    That's probably better than anything I'll ever write. But I think that "!!!" is ummm... not very literary. Still, it was very good. Thanks.

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  2. Jason C. Miller11:39 AM

    Thanks! The "!!!" was meant to convey a feeling. I don't think words could have done it justice. :)

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  3. Anonymous1:38 PM

    I too am impressed! Who new someone whom Tivo's SBTB could have written something so.... well..... beautiful!

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  4. Jason C. Miller2:10 PM

    It's "WHO"....not "whom"! "Someone" is not the object in this case! :)

    (hrmph)

    And what's wrong with SBTFB?!?!?!

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