Ok...it's one of those random freak times of the year and I'm feeling literary. So, sit back, STHU, and enjoy my petty attempt to make sense. :)The Disconnect
By: Me
We meet
She smiles
I look away
We walk
We talk
We touch
I look away
She talks to me
She laughs with me
She jokes with me
I look away
She comforts me
She holds my hand
She listens to me
I look away
She holds me
She flirts with me
She brightens my day
I look away
I wake up
I look to her
I finally smile
but she is gone
!!!
I frown
I shrug
I ponder
I learn
Sonofa....
By: Me
We meet
She smiles
I look away
We walk
We talk
We touch
I look away
She talks to me
She laughs with me
She jokes with me
I look away
She comforts me
She holds my hand
She listens to me
I look away
She holds me
She flirts with me
She brightens my day
I look away
I wake up
I look to her
I finally smile
but she is gone
!!!
I frown
I shrug
I ponder
I learn
Sonofa....
4 comments:
That's probably better than anything I'll ever write. But I think that "!!!" is ummm... not very literary. Still, it was very good. Thanks.
Thanks! The "!!!" was meant to convey a feeling. I don't think words could have done it justice. :)
I too am impressed! Who new someone whom Tivo's SBTB could have written something so.... well..... beautiful!
It's "WHO"....not "whom"! "Someone" is not the object in this case! :)
(hrmph)
And what's wrong with SBTFB?!?!?!
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